A Sure Foundation

Review of Ronald V. Huggins. “Hugh Nibley’s
Footnotes.” In Salt Lake City Messenger 110
(May 2008): 9–21.

A Sure Foundation

Reviewed by Shirley S. Ricks

There is no incentive . . . to question an author/historian,
with whom he or she agrees.[1]

In this article Ronald Huggins[2] questions the
accuracy and validity of Hugh Nibley’s use of his sources. He claims that “Nibley’s
misuse of sources goes beyond seeing things in them that aren’t there” and
that he “regularly modifies his quotations to artificially render them
more supportive of the arguments he is trying to make. He sometimes
mistranslates them . . . or else translates them in very strange and
unjustified ways” (p. 10).[3]

Nature of the Attacks, Arguments, and

Huggins does not seem to be concerned here with an
additional charge that has been leveled at Nibley’s footnotes—namely,
that of sloppy, botched, or incomplete citations. Anyone who has source checked
Nibley’s footnotes will grant that there is some truth to this claim. Nibley
made just about every kind of error possible in those citations: wrong page
numbers, wrong years, even wrong authors, incomplete information, lack of
article titles, and so forth, but, more often than not, when a particularly
intractable source was finally located, Nibley’s citation made some sense, with
typographical errors often bearing some blame.

Huggins seems, rather, to be concerned with Nibley’s
possible misquotations or mistranslations: “I use the term ‘misquote’ to
mean to
misrepresent in any way
, e.g., by adding to or taking
away from a passage, asserting that it means something other than it does,
reading things into it, or mistranslating it” (p. 10). Using as a
springboard Martha Beck’s claimed encounter in a supermarket with a “man
in tweed” who informs her that her father made up 90 percent of his
Huggins claims that Nibley misrepresents various early Christian sources in his

He also claims that Nibley misquotes several sources at one
stroke in his “The Passing of the Primitive Church.”[5]
In his discussion of this article, Huggins quotes R. M. Grant as complaining
that “Nibley had ‘not always taken into account the context of the Fathers’
statements or for that matter their use of homiletical rhetoric'”
(p. 16). However, Huggins neglects to set this complaint in the wider
context of scholarly debate that appeared in the pages of Church History
following the appearance of Nibley’s article.[6]

In a review of the newest volume in the Collected Works of
Hugh Nibley—Eloquent Witness: Nibley on Himself, Others, and the
Jeff Needle, a non-Mormon, acknowledges:

I am not unaware of the criticisms that have been hurled
at Dr. Nibley, both before and after his death. . . .

And I know that some have questioned
the quality of Nibley’s scholarship. Did he tend to be sloppy in his research?
Were his footnotes a nightmare to verify? Did he make stuff up out of whole
cloth? All of these charges have been hurled at him. His defenders ignore the
charges. His detractors thrill at the thought of bringing down this most
prominent of Mormon scholars.[7]

Showing an awareness of these issues but not responding
to them, Needle goes on to declare that “this volume is not so much about
scholarship, research, or any academic concern,” although they “are
reflected here. But the thrust of this book is to introduce to readers the man,
Hugh Nibley.”

One indication that the issue of the accuracy of Nibley’s
footnotes has been around for some time is the fact that the following question
has been posed and responded to on a FAIR Web site: “I’ve heard that Hugh
Nibley really just faked or distorted most of his footnotes. Is there any truth
to this?” A thoughtful response follows.[8]

My Approach

I wish here to clarify the purpose of footnotes in scholarly
publications and discuss their accuracy in other publications as well as in Nibley’s
writings. I will describe the process used in checking his notes and share
experiences of source checkers with Nibley’s notes. Rather than resurrect all
the material that has previously been brought to bear on this issue, I will
quote from just a few earlier sources but will provide references in notes for
interested readers.[9]
I will present several new statements that I have gathered and will also turn
to Nibley’s own writings in his defense. As he is not here to defend himself in
person, it seems appropriate to cite relevant passages that he has written.

The Functions of Footnotes

Authors are expected to give information in their footnotes
that is complete, clear, and relevant so a future reader or researcher can find
the original sources and thereby validate (or question) the author’s claims and
perhaps build upon that research in advancing scholarship or improving
knowledge. “Any paper based on the writings of others should acknowledge
the sources used. Not only is it common courtesy and honesty to give credit
where credit is due, but it is a sign of scrupulousness to tell the source of a
statement, so that a reader can judge for himself the evidence it is based on.”[10]
Modern historians must “perform two complementary tasks. They must examine
all the sources relevant to the solution of a problem and construct a new
narrative or argument from them. The footnote proves that both tasks have been
carried out.”[11]
The Chicago
Manual of Style
reminds us: “Ethics, copyright laws, and
courtesy to readers require authors to identify the sources of direct quotations
and of any facts or opinions not generally known or easily checked.”[12]
Andy Guess, in an article evaluating the use and accuracy of footnotes, explains:
“Theoretically, scholarly references serve a dual purpose: They indicate
an author’s familiarity with established literature and assign credit to
previous work, while from the other direction many would argue they signal a
paper’s relevance and standing within a discipline.”[13] Since
scholarly publications are intended to build upon previous knowledge and
findings, it is incumbent on academic authors to provide references to works
they quote or consult. This is all part of the system in which scholars present
their findings to see if their conclusions will be accepted, rejected, or

Accuracy of Footnotes in General

Guess, acknowledging that
citations are “far from perfect,” notes that “researchers tend
to cite papers that support their conclusions and downplay or ignore work that
calls them into question. . . . Maybe they overlook research written
in other languages, or aren’t familiar with relevant work in a related but
different field, or spelled an author’s name wrong, or listed the wrong journal.”[14]
Guess refers to work by Malcolm Wright and Scott Armstrong, who divided problem
citations into two categories: “incorrect references” and “quotation
errors.” Looking at the medical field, they determined of the former type
that “31 percent of the references in public health journals contained
errors, and three percent of these were so severe that the referenced material
could not be located”; they also cited studies that “42 percent of references
in dental journals were inaccurate—30 percent of these were major errors,
such as incorrect journal titles, article titles, or authors”—and
that other medical journals had 32 to 67 percent error rates. “This
problem is serious even for the most prestigious journals.”[15]
This seems to be the sort of botched citation that Huggins is not particularly
concerned with in Nibley’s works.

But, as Wright and Armstrong correctly recognize, “more
serious . . . are articles that incorrectly quote a cited paper or, as the
authors put it, ‘misreport findings.'”[16] They detail
this second type of problem in this same study: “authors’ descriptions of
previous studies in public health journals differed from the original copy in
30 percent of references; half of these descriptions were unrelated to the
quoting authors’ contentions.”[17]
Wright and Armstrong believe their findings in health literature reflect
problems in other scientific fields, and this misreporting is the type that
Huggins takes issue with Nibley on.

Generally speaking, authors retain ultimate responsibility
for their citations. Regarding footnote accuracy, I find such statements as “Please
check every footnote to ensure substantive and technical accuracy. 
statement of fact or law should have a footnote.”[18] “Confirm
that the list of references has been checked carefully for accuracy and that
each of the references has been read by at least one of the authors.”[19]
“Manuscripts will not be accepted for publication unless all footnotes and
citations are in compliance with a Uniform System of Citation, 18th
edition. The author is responsible for compliance with this system of citation
and footnote accuracy.”[20]
And even our own style guide for the FARMS Review asks the author to
sign the following statement: “I have verified the accuracy of all quotations
from other sources (including scriptures) that I have cited in my review.” I must admit, however, that having our
authors sign such a statement does not relieve them of the responsibility of providing
photocopies of their sources for us so we can check their citations carefully.
Many, if not most, publishing houses no longer have the resources to provide
source-checking services; at the Maxwell Institute, however, we feel strongly
that checking the notes of our publications is something we owe to our readers
(and our authors). And, yes, most submissions include errors of varying degrees
of seriousness, despite the authors’ claims of having verified their citations.

Clearly, these statements
placing the responsibility with the authors reflect the ideal world. Anyone who
has even briefly checked the notes of submitted papers has usually muttered (or
worse) about authors who can’t seem to get it right. Here is a rather amusing
comment from a librarian (at a theological seminary, no less) about citation

Librarians’ job
security grows with citation inaccuracy, for their expertise, tools, and
experience-informed hunches can yield results when people need to catch and
correct errors, enhance impoverished citations, or identify and locate misquoted,
badly cited, and/or elusive sources. At the same time, a librarian’s keen
frustration is the inaccurate citation that impedes direct retrieval or
interlibrary loan. Usually the citation itself is the problem, not an error by
the person seeking help.[21]

As an editor myself, I identify with the sentiments of this

who has spent any time copyediting scholarly manuscripts . . . would not be
surprised at all by this information about the high rate of incorrect citation.
At first, as a beginning editor, I was appalled to find so many mistakes in the
footnotes of senior scholars. . . . Who knows how many scholars have
been spared from embarrassment by their copyeditors working quietly behind the
scenes to repair their flawed writings?[22]

An Egregious Example of Misusing Sources

I have recently become aware of a published
book—Michael A. Bellesiles’s Arming America: The Origins of a National
Gun Culture—
that was awarded the Bancroft Prize in history in
2001. However, because other scholars and independent researchers showed Bellesiles’s
research to be inaccurate or even fraudulent, the award was rescinded in 2002
(the only time this has ever happened) and Bellesiles resigned from a tenured
position at Emory University.[23]

One of Bellesiles’s early critics, Clayton E. Cramer, noted
vast differences between the author’s conclusions and the literature he was
familiar with on a similar topic from that time period. At first, Cramer
graciously proposed various explanations to account for the differences:
perhaps the sources reflected different regions of America; perhaps Bellesiles
relied more on official sources and government documents; perhaps he began with
a different set of assumptions—but then Cramer began to find “glaring
discrepancies” between Bellesiles’s “claims and what his sources
actually said” and “incorrect quotations—and consistently
incorrect in a direction that supported his thesis—never the other
direction.” He “found quotations taken so severely out of context
that Bellesiles’ use of them had completely inverted the author’s meaning”
and “that his representations of unambiguous primary and secondary sources
were often completely the reverse of what they actually said.”[24]

Ultimately, Cramer concluded that “the sources that
Bellesiles cites . . . never support [his claim], and usually directly
contradict it. In many cases, the most charitable assumption that can be made
is that Bellesiles copied citations out of secondary works regarding gunpowder
storage without bothering to check to see if they applied to firearms.”[25]
He said it was possible to “pick a page, any page” and find severe
errors, “sometimes with the very first footnote. . . . It would appear
that many of America’s most prominent historians assumed that if Professor
Bellesiles made an astonishing factual claim, well, he must have looked it up,
because Arming
is full of endnotes and an impressive sea of citations.”[26]

Part of the concern over this widely publicized book and its
subsequent disgrace arose because of its political implications—gun lobbyists
had long claimed that weapons served an important part in colonial life,
whereas Bellesiles was attempting to prove just the opposite.[27]
The reason I bring this incident up is to illustrate that Huggins seems to echo
many of the arguments used against Bellesiles’s book to decry Nibley’s work.
Even so, I don’t believe that Huggins is willing to pour the baby out with the
bathwater—I don’t believe he is proposing that nothing Nibley has written
has merit.

Accuracy of Nibley’s Notes

What this boils down to is the accuracy of Nibley’s notes on
two levels: the botched, incomplete citations and the misrepresentations.
Perhaps here would be an appropriate place to review the source-checking
process that has been used in attempting to verify Nibley’s notes.[28]
According to John W. Welch, who has been instrumental in the conception and
publishing of the Collected Works of Hugh Nibley:

We assigned editors to begin working on each of the first
ten volumes. One of the most important functions was to source check all of
Nibley’s quotes and footnotes. To do this, each editor made use of a large team
of source checkers, who became known as the “Collected Workers of Hugh
Nibley,” wearing a t-shirt with that name.[29] Many of the
source checkers were volunteers, but the mainstay of the source-checking effort
were people who were hired as BYU students or friends of FARMS. . . . We were
able to move expeditiously to put together a large temporary team, and between
1984 and 1989 we brought out nine volumes of the Collected Works, an
unprecedented publishing feat.[30]

In 1988, Fran Clark joined the project to assist in
transcribing, organizing, and managing the electronic versions of the
materials, a massive task; Welch considers her arrival an answer to prayer.
Clark also worked closely with Nibley himself as he made dictations for the
(still) long-awaited One Eternal Round. As one of Clark’s 1988 journal
entries reveals, Nibley wasn’t always the easiest person to work with:

In time, I learned that if I wanted to make a change (one
I knew would later need to be fixed), I would do it without consulting him. If
it were one he needed to correct—like sentence form or a necessary
footnote—I’d say, “I think we need a reference here,”
or “I think I’ve made a mistake.” That way, he was still in
charge, which he had to make clear to me from day one. After that was settled,
he relaxed and we worked well together.[31]

About this time James V. Tredway was asked to track the progress
of each volume and keep the project moving along.[32] He relates
in remarkable detail some of his experiences in source checking Nibley
materials, which recollections also reveal interesting insights into Nibley the

Once in a while I would get stuck with a recalcitrant
footnote that no one else could find and then it was my responsibility to
approach Dr. Nibley about its citation information, which I can honestly say he
loathed. He would say to me every once in a while that I did not have to
footnote everything, but then when he was working on something new he would
sometimes stop by Ancient Studies and ask me where a particular citation was
located; . . . he wanted to have it right.

On another occasion
when Matt Roper and I were sourcing his four Ensign articles on the atonement, . . . we came across
an essential quote that neither of us could find, so with some fear and
trepidation we proceeded to Nibley’s little green house. I knocked on the door,
and he answered. I asked him where that quote was from, and he said, “Any
fool knows where that quote is from!” Taken aback a bit by his abrasiveness
and not knowing what else to say, I said, “Well I must not be a fool ’cause
I can’t find it.” That stopped him dead in his tracks, and he grabbed the
manuscript and went back into the house in a huff.

We stood there for what seemed like
an eternity while we could hear papers rattling and books coming out of his bedside
library tossed here and there, and there was a continuous angry mumbling that
played in the background like a cello. Finally, he returned to the door more
sheepishly than I had ever seen him and said he couldn’t find it and would have
to get back to us. Matt and I were biting our lips by then. I reminded Nibley
that we needed it by the weekend. Before the weekend was upon us, the
manuscript appeared with the new citation inserted. Matt and I rushed to the
stacks to check, and sure enough, it was exact. We were flabbergasted, thinking
that he would not be able to find such a quote, but he did.[33]

This experience demonstrates a couple of facts: When
Nibley was alive, source checkers used every avenue possible to solve a
citation problem by themselves, but if they still couldn’t resolve the issues,
they did approach Nibley, who begrudgingly (because it took him away from
whatever he was concentrating on at the moment) directed them to the source.
Phyllis Nibley reports that her husband worried a lot about his notes and was
quite meticulous in formulating them.[34]

One of the team of source checkers, Janet Carpenter, gives
her recollection of the process:

I can say that I can personally vouch for the accuracy of
the footnotes. We went through with a fine-tooth comb and verified everything.
I remember as we would wrap up a book, there would be some we couldn’t find
that then would be dealt with, but the number of problems was minuscule compared
to the volume that we did find. Nibley’s accuracy was amazing. When we couldn’t
find something, it was always our fault or a typist’s problem in the original

Mistakes were not always attributable to Nibley, the
typists, or the source checkers. Sometimes editors or publishers seemed to introduce
errors in the notes, as well as in the text. Tredway continues:[36]

When we got to doing Tinkling Cymbals and Sounding Brass,
it turned out to be very problematic as many of the citations appeared to be
wrong. So Matt and I went to Church headquarters and xeroxed every anti-Mormon
book that Nibley cited. We brought that mass of manuscripts home and began the
daunting task of searching through all those books for every single quote,
going page by page. . . . Thanks to Matt’s incredible patience and
industry, we were able to locate every single quote and in doing so we
discovered that all the citations were actually there, but they were jumbled.[37]
Apparently the editor had mixed them all up somehow, and when the galleys came
I guess Hugh never checked to see if they were kept intact, but rather focused
only on the text. I also learned pretty quickly that Hugh did not like editors
at all. They were forever making little changes that altered his point without
realizing what they had done.[38]

Additionally, in some of Nibley’s works, few or no
references were given. Source checkers, if they were unable to find the quotations,
would sometimes take off the quotation marks and supply a reference that seemed
to cover the same territory.[39]
These manufactured notes may have been inadequate compared to what Nibley
himself might have provided (had he been persuaded to revisit an earlier

In the following comment, Tredway mentions the (in)famous
Nibley pencil marks in books that source checkers were always delighted to find
(that meant they had found the very book Nibley had used, which made it easier
to locate and verify the quotations). Nibley often penciled little notations in
the margins to emphasize a point (his notes could be pictures, shorthand
symbols, or words and phrases in any number of languages)—library patrons
would be in big trouble today if they indulged in this habit. Tredway relates:

As far as the thousands upon thousands of footnotes that
we checked, I remember no glaring errors. . . .

. . . I was amazed at the accuracy of his transcriptions as
we checked the sources against them. . . . I can’t imagine how he read so
widely because there were Nibley tracks (notations) in so many books in the
Harold B. Lee Library that it seemed no one could have read that much, and that
was only one library. When I went to Berkeley to find some of his sources, I
found Nibley tracks scattered all over there too. It had been rumored that he started
on the first floor and went through every book of interest to him all the way
to the top floor of the library, which was many floors (maybe as many as nine).[41]
And we got books through Interlibrary Loan from Harvard, Princeton, Stanford,
and a bunch of other universities with those same tracks. To think that he
typed each quote by hand on a card with that old manual typewriter and indexed
them without any computer was mind boggling.[42]

Here we have one clue why some of Nibley’s citations
may have been inaccurate—he read extremely widely and took notes on
three-by-five-inch index cards without the benefit of modern computers or copy
machines. Anyone making that volume of notes by hand is bound to make some
mistakes. Tyler Moulton, one of the Collected Workers, reports on his
experience in source checking Nibley footnotes:

Having spent hundreds of hours poring over thousands of
Nibley’s footnotes, I will agree that Nibley was at times sloppy. His legendary
methodology of keeping his research notes on 3 x 5 cards in shoeboxes did not
always lend itself to absolute accuracy—either in context or reference.
In Brother
Brigham Challenges the Saints
, for example, Nibley made frequent use
of the Journal
of Discourses
, among other sources. Andy Hedges and I were tasked
with tracking down as many of the remaining “mystery footnotes” from
this volume as we could. Our methodology was to work through every variation of
the given footnote numbers until we stumbled upon the source, and in almost
every instance we eventually found the correct combination. Far from being an
example of fabricating sources, the frequent transposition of numbers caused me
to occasionally joke about Nibley’s apparent dyslexia.[43]

Tredway relates that when he was having difficulty locating
some of the sources for “Paths That Stray,”[44] he went in
desperation to Nibley’s house, where he was taken upstairs and shown a huge cardboard
box filled with scraps of articles. He found “in that box every single
quote and every single citation for the entire manuscript. Not a single one of
them was misquoted, out of context, or inappropriately cited.”[45]

I will include here one more reminiscence from Tredway,
which reveals that what may seem at first to be inaccurate actually turns out
to be correct:

A group of us researchers used to try to find something that
Hugh was off base on. It was kind of a game we played to make the time pass. On
one occasion we found something—I think it was in the Pearl of Great
Price articles, a Masonic symbol as I recall—and we were sure Hugh had got
his description all wrong. We set out to find everything we could on that
topic. After much work, to our surprise and chagrin it turned out he was right
on target and we were dead wrong. And this happened over and over, and after
some time it became the rule not to prejudge Nibley before you had done your
homework because he turned over every rock on the stream bed before he put pen
to paper.[46]

John Gee relates a similar experience in discovering Nibley’s
uncanny accuracy:

Nibley, in a throwaway line, compared an Egyptian text with
a passage in the Talmud about alabaster.[47] When I
checked the given source, I thought that although the source said what Nibley
said it said, that Nibley was guilty of free association. Doing research for a
graduate seminar that focused on the same passage in the Talmud, I discovered
that there was actually a rather bizarre connection between the two passages,
which I discuss in my article “The Keeper of the Gate.”[48]

Charge of Fabricated Notes

Those of us who have spent hours tracking down Nibley
sources have become firmly convinced that nothing was made up or fabricated.
Even if we were ultimately unable to find a quotation, we always knew it
existed somewhere. Sometimes we serendipitously ran across something that
solved a different problem than the one we were researching. Gee recalls:

I think all the source checkers have stories like this.
Some of the problems were not Nibley’s fault. I remember discovering a
recalcitrant source that was cited dozens of times but which we could not find
in the library (Urk. VI). I was looking for another book in the stacks when a
book caught my eye. Pulling it out and looking at it, I discovered that it was
the long-lost source. The library had rebound the book and mislabeled it on the
cover and the spine. Nibley had dutifully written the correct bibliography in
pencil inside the cover.

Another time, we looked everywhere for weeks for Georgius
Cedrenus and Georgius Syncellus without any luck. On a whim, we looked in the
card catalog under “George” and found that the library had two copies
of both authors within ten feet of where we were working.[49]

No, Nibley did not fabricate his notes! According to Welch,

Many people also continued to parrot mindlessly the unfounded
criticism that Nibley’s footnotes were all made up or were not reliable. Our
source checkers, quite to the contrary, found Nibley’s sources were, for the
most part, very insightfully interpreted and accurately reflected. Many of the
footnotes were cryptic and incomplete and so a lot of work was required to make
them clear, but to an informed, intelligent reader even the early citations
should have been comprehensible and seen as credible.[50]

Gee reaffirmed this claim in an e-mail correspondence
to Huggins:

I still stand by [my] two statements [made earlier] . . .
: “I have never seen any case where Hugh Nibley ever fabricated or made up
a source. After looking up thousands of citations, I have seen him make just
about every mistake I think one could make, but I have never seen him make up
anything.” “In no case could I determine that any of the errors in
the footnotes were intentional or that any of the footnotes were fabrications.”[51]

Moulton asserts that when he was working on the article “Science
Fiction and the Gospel,” several source checkers had been unable to locate
Nibley’s sources (after all, this was given as a talk and probably didn’t have
fleshed-out footnotes).

For days I searched in vain for any evidence of the referenced
authors or titles. (This was in the dark era before the Internet.) In a couple
of instances I had found stories resembling Nibley’s descriptions, but neither
author nor title matched. Not knowing what else to do, I substituted the references
I discovered for those given by Nibley. But in most cases I could find nothing.
I was about ready to give up and turn the manuscript back in when, late one
night while perusing the stacks in the HBLL, I randomly stumbled upon an
anthology of science fiction pieces bearing Nibley’s telltale shorthand
scratchings in the margins. A quick perusal confirmed that many of the authors
and titles I had been searching for were indeed there, and similar anthologies
(with similar chicken scratches) uncovered the rest. (I discovered that the
stories I had encountered previously were indeed the stories Nibley had
referenced, but as was common at the time, they had been republished in
different places under different pseudonyms and titles.)[52]

Moulton makes a good point that “some of the blame
for inadequate or misleading references must fall to us—the compilers,
editors, and source checkers—since it was well known at the time that in
a great many cases Nibley agreed only grudgingly and after serious protestation
to the publication of much of this work”—in other words, he hadn’t
written it with publication in mind. Perhaps “what we prepared for general
scholarly consumption was, in more than a few instances, originally intended
only as his latest musings for informal gatherings. Our insistence on making as
much as possible of Nibley’s work available has perhaps brought on the
unintended consequence of weakening the perception of his scholarship.”[53]

For example, Nibley never intended for the book Approaching
to be published.[54]
Tredway gathered up the various articles and proposed it as a book to Stephen
Ricks, who subsequently sold John Welch on the idea. Nibley was not fond of
that book when it came out because it was a collection of talks and not as
scholarly as some of his writing—he apparently told his Book of Mormon
students not to buy it. However, it subsequently became a bestseller. A book
that he never wanted published has reportedly changed the lives of countless
individuals, while no one has made that claim about his scholarly work in the Ancient

In one recent volume of the Collected Works of Hugh Nibley, we
were faced with the situation of adapting Nibley’s class notes from the fifties
into a book form. We published Apostles and Bishops in Early Christianity in
2005 with over seventy notes saying tersely, “Source unidentified.”
However, Douglas F. Salmon, working on his own initiative, has located over 60
percent of those sources.[55]
To reiterate, Nibley does not fake his sources.

This brings me back to the question posed on the FAIR Web
site: “I’ve heard that Hugh Nibley really just faked or distorted most of
his footnotes. Is there any truth to this?” The summary response given here
says: “There is no question but that Hugh Nibley was an absolutely
brilliant scholar. He was also very creative and sometimes overaggressive in
his use of sources, and sometimes he was wrong about things, as are all
scholars and indeed all human beings. But the notion that he just made up his
footnotes is simply ridiculous.”[56] The full
response includes quotations from a source checker (anonymous), Boyd J.
Petersen (Nibley’s son-in-law and biographer), Kent P. Jackson (who offered a
less-than-positive critique of volume 1 of the Collected Works), and John Gee
(who, along with Stephen Ricks, “has probably checked as many or more of
Nibley’s footnotes than anyone alive”). Gee’s conclusion is that “the
vast majority of his footnotes are correct and that only a few are questioned;
even fewer would be seen as questionable. . . . Those of us checking
footnotes spent more of our time dealing with problems (a correct footnote
takes only a minute or so to check, while fixing a problem may take hours), and
that makes us inclined to vastly overestimate the number of problems.”[57]

Charge of Misrepresentation

The grievance that Nibley misrepresented his sources or took
things out of context must be examined.[58] Because of
Nibley’s wide background reading, I believe that he grasped the big picture and
could interpret things in ways that unsettled some of his readers who may have
been unaware of the context in which he wrote. Again, Tredway renders an

It seems a bit ironic to me that they would accuse Nibley of
taking things out of context when in many cases such a context did not even
exist when he wrote them. Conversely, having said that, I am also not so sure
that those so-called scraps of ideas that seem to be found all over the world
are in fact not related. I think it remains to be seen just how related they
turn out to be. We are constantly finding new connections that we did not know
existed yesterday and if Nibley had any gift at all it was an uncanny ability
to see connections or trends where most saw nothing but chaos.[59]

Don Norton, who has edited much of Nibley’s writings, questions
whether Huggins recognizes a proportion between what Nibley got wrong versus
what he got right:

Huggins notes what he thinks are
liberties with sources, but fails to acknowledge where and how overwhelmingly often
Nibley was right. He glibly sets up some sweeping (and very questionable)
allegations, offers a few examples, and then alleges these are but a drop in
the bucket to Nibley’s offenses. Few scholars could survive such shabby
treatment, certainly not Huggins himself.[60]

Michael Rhodes, who
is currently preparing Nibley’s One Eternal Round manuscript for publication, echoes Norton’s
thoughts: “My experience in checking on thousands of Nibley’s footnotes is
that more than 90% of the time he is completely accurate. In the remaining
cases, for the most part, there is some trivial discrepancy. In rare cases, he
does get it wrong. He was, after all, human like the rest of us and could make
mistakes. What is impressive is that his mistakes are so few.”[61]

Glen Cooper, one of the Collected Workers, describes his
experience in checking Nibley’s notes:

I have had extensive
experience checking Nibley’s footnote references in the Graeco-Roman classics
and church fathers. . . .

. . . I never found anything that
indicated less than integrity on Hugh’s part in reporting others’ work, or in
attributing sources. In fact, I was always impressed by his sincerity in his
use of sources, as well as the strength and conviction of his testimony of the
gospel and church. . . . If he had a fault as a scholar, perhaps it was haste
and impatience. He was the genius with the vision; the work of other scholars
had to be accounted for—that is the scholar’s responsibility after all.[62]


Huggins contends that Nibley manipulates translations to his
own needs, adding things that don’t exist in the Greek[63] or creating
translations that differ from those of other experts. In his article, Huggins
focuses on translations of early Christian documents, which approach makes
sense, since that is his field of expertise.[64] Nibley’s
reading and writings, however, extend over a much wider range than this narrow
area. Evangelical scholars Carl Mosser and Paul Owen concede that

whatever one may think
about Nibley’s conclusions, the breadth of learning displayed in these lectures
[that ultimately appeared in The World and the
Prophets, CWHN
3] is intimidating.
In them he discusses hundreds of texts from Papias, Clement, Ignatius,
Irenaeus, Clement of Alexandria, Origen, Athanasius, Augustine, and Chrysostom
(among others). In classic Nibley style, all references are personally
translated from Greek and Latin originals; rarely are translations listed for
modern German, French, or Italian works.[65]

Huggins, in developing his case against Nibley’s
interpretations, always seems to cite the translations of others in comparison
to Nibley’s and never seems confident enough to translate the primary sources himself.[66]
In defending himself and his translation of the Bible, Martin Luther puts
things in perspective:

Yet why should I be concerned about their ranting and
raving? I will not stop them from translating as they want. But I too shall
translate, not as they please but as I please. And whoever does not like it can
just ignore it and keep his criticism to himself, for I will neither look at
nor listen to it. They do not have to answer for my translation or bear any
responsibility for it.[67]

So when Huggins turns to a consensus of experts, does that establish
a claim, or is it possible that “Nibley actually got it right in
contradiction to all the experts”?[68] Moulton
relates an experience in checking one of Nibley’s translations:

I will say that in the one instance in which I had the responsibility
to check a translation in a language in which I had personal expertise
(Spanish)—a language, moreover, that Nibley had little experience
with—I was surprised by his translation. I began by consulting the
original and making my own translation, then compared what I had come up with
against Nibley’s. They were wildly different. But as I went back through it
carefully, it quickly became apparent that Nibley’s understanding of Spanish
nuance (based, I assume, on his command of Latin) far exceeded my own, and his
translation, while unconventional, was far superior to my own, capturing far
more accurately both the tone and the meaning of the original. From my perspective,
Nibley’s skills in translation were nothing short of prodigious.[69]

In addition to the possibility that Nibley was a genius with
languages, let’s examine some additional potential reasons Nibley’s
translations may differ from those of others.

¥  Nibley
is using a more ancient and therefore more accurate text to translate from.

¥  Nibley’s
wide reading and understanding of the entire milieu gives him a better
understanding of how the passage should be translated, but this is not common
knowledge (broader hermeneutics).

¥  Nibley
had a better grasp of the English language than other translators did.[70]

¥  Nibley
did not feel bound by some of the rules that some translators use that often
result in stilted translations.

¥  Nibley
was careless in where he put quotation marks on his note cards.

¥  Nibley
was not competent in Greek or Hebrew (or any of the other languages he

Some of these ideas are more plausible than others. I am
willing to grant all but the last option, but given that Nibley was able to
quote passages at length (from memory) in the original language and then
translate on the fly, one becomes convinced that he was indeed very competent
in these languages and was brilliant in decoding what the author meant.
Kristian Heal, a Syriac expert, comments on Nibley’s unique translation of the
first line of the Hymn of the Pearl as “In my first primeval

The first line of the Hymn of the Pearl/the Soul is rendered
by the two earliest translators, William Wright (1871) and A. A. Bevan (1897),
as “When I was a little child.” This is an accurate translation of
the Syriac, though “young child” may be better since the Syriac seems
to suggest the innocence and simplicity of the child.

Nibley’s rendering is
obviously highly evocative for Latter-day Saints[73] and casts
the hymn squarely as an allegory of premortal and mortal life. I would
characterize it as an elegant, poetic, but thoroughly tendentious translation
that seeks to reinforce his interpretation of the poem as a whole. I have no
doubt that Nibley understood the text. To my mind, it would have been desirable
to indicate the more literal rendering in a footnote.[74]

Obviously, Nibley’s style of translation in not necessarily
Here is his own description of the process of translation:

You translate with the book closed.
You decide exactly what the original writer had in mind. Unless you know, don’t
leave his text; stay with him until you decide you know what he means. Then
close the book—never translate with it open—and put down in your own
words what you think the author had in mind, what you have gotten from the
text. No two people are going to get the same thing.[76]

In this same article, he also says that “the
translation is a commentary—what the translator thinks the writer had in
mind.” He explains that “every word is a password. Not only is the
text loaded, every word is loaded, and every translation is an interpretation.
It is a paradox.”[77]
So whatever the explanation for the differences in translation between Nibley
and the commentators, did his “mistranslations” (as described and
identified by Huggins) send Nibley’s arguments and conclusions so far afield
that they lost all validity? How has his work stood the test of time? Norton
explores Nibley’s translations further:

Nibley did have two
major and often unappreciated things going for him. First, he simply knew so
much! Thus, in the interest of space, he often translated or cited sources in a
context rarely available to the mostly pedestrian (and usually far more “prejudiced”)
scholarly community. For example, when he cited an early church father, it was
in the context of his having read all the early church fathers, in their original
languages. . . . He also remained mute on countless views and
doctrines—you get only a hint here and there of all he knew. His
knowledge was largely private, the result of his passion to satisfy his own
personal curiosity, as he used to often say.

Second, he had a reliable frame of reference: the restored
gospel and access to the Spirit.[78]

I find Norton’s last
suggestion very intriguing. Richard Lloyd Anderson, in an examination of the
Olivet Prophecy and Joseph Smith’s translation of Matthew 24 in the Pearl of
Great Price, concluded that Joseph Smith did not work with any original
language to prepare his “translation.” “In fact, Greek variant
readings simply do not exist for most changes made, whether here or elsewhere
in the Inspired Version. Such evidence proves that Joseph Smith worked on the
level of meaning and doctrinal harmonization, not narrow textual precision. . .
. This suggests that the Prophet used his basic document . . . as a point of
departure instead of a translation guide. . . . One may label this as ‘translation’
only in the broadest sense.”[79]
Without going so far as to grant prophethood to Nibley, it does not seem
impossible or implausible that he could have relied on the Spirit to aid in his
“translation” efforts. Luther, referring to his own translation of
the Bible into the language of the people, proclaimed: “Ah, translating is
not everyone’s skill as some mad saints imagine. It requires a right, devout,
honest, sincere, God-fearing, Christian, trained, educated, and experienced
heart”—in other words, a person cognizant of and sensitive to the
Spirit (in fact, he holds “that no false Christian or sectarian spirit can
be a good translator”).[80]

As I conclude my thoughts on the value and veracity of
Nibley’s footnotes, I wish to quote Norton once more, who reminds us of Nibley’s
opinions of his own writing:

I’ve never done intensive comparison of what Nibley cited
from sources and what the sources actually said. I guess I’ve just had implicit
faith that Nibley was being as responsible as humanly possible. I am aware that
he often quoted from memory (especially the scriptures) and was not always
precise in writing down the exact wording and page numbers of sources, though
virtually always the right meaning. Over the years, I’ve talked to many who have
done source checking, and they say they have rarely found Nibley taking any
liberty with a source. Quite the contrary. Nibley would be the first to admit
to human error on his part, but his breadth of learning and sheer genius make
such shortcomings seem insignificant. I don’t think his critics have much of an
idea of the competence he brought to his work—but his scholarly peers
were certainly overwhelmed by his knowledge and abilities.[81]

Scholars have recognized that Nibley was unique in his
preparation and his knowledge. Mosser and Owen call him the “father of
Mormon scholarly apologetics,” as they describe his “seemingly endless
stream of books and articles covering a vast array of subject matter. Whether
writing on Patristics, the Dead Sea Scrolls, the Apocrypha, the culture of the
Ancient Near East, or Mormonism, he demonstrates an impressive command of the
original languages, primary texts, and secondary literature.”[82]
They go on to recognize that “the few evangelicals who are aware of Hugh
Nibley often dismiss him as a fraud or pseudo-scholar”; Mosser and Owen
recommend that those who would dismiss his writings should pay heed to Truman
Madsen’s warning: “Ill wishing critics have suspected over the years that
Nibley is wrenching his sources, hiding behind his footnotes, and reading into
antique languages what no responsible scholar would ever read out.
Unfortunately, few have the tools to do the checking.”[83] Mosser and
Owen continue in the same vein:

No doubt there are flaws in Nibley’s work, but most
countercultists do not have the tools to uncover them. Few have tried.
. . . Whatever flaws may exist in his methodology, Nibley is a
scholar of high caliber. Many of his more important essays first appeared in
academic journals. . . . Nibley has also received praise from non-LDS
scholars such as Jacob Neusner, James Charlesworth, Cyrus Gordon, Raphael
Patai, and Jacob Milgrom.[84]
The former dean of the Harvard Divinity School, George MacRae, once lamented
while hearing him lecture, “It is obscene for a man to know that much!”[85]

Nibley on His Own Writings and Publication in

Last, but not least, I quote some gems, in chronological
order, from the grand master himself:

I refuse to be held responsible for anything I wrote more
than three years ago. For heaven’s sake, I hope we are moving forward here.
After all, the implication that one mistake and it is all over with—how
flattering to think in forty years I have not made one slip and I am still in
business! I would say about four-fifths of everything I put down has changed,
of course. That is the whole idea; this is an ongoing process.[86]

It may seem churlish to cite sources to which the reader has
no access, but the purpose of such is to silence critics who are eager to call
everything into question, and rightly so. If they want to run the stuff down
they are cordially invited to do so—that is part of the game.[87]

What I am working on now is far more interesting than what
has gone before. And so I tend to let all the rest of it go. What is worth
saving will probably be saved, but that can’t be very much, and in this world
it is vain to pin one’s hopes on the survival of anything for long. What
belongs to the eternities will not be lost; the rest does not interest me very

Going back over things I wrote years ago, in taking an
inventory of the garage, I find that some of it is not so bad, and that time
has been very kind to some of my more ambitious articles. Wherefore, I am now
aspiring to produce one thing which at least will not be very, very bad. For
this, I look to the future, and as far as I am concerned, the past stuff must
by its very nature be inferior, since it came forth in my perpetual jahiliyyah
(“time of ignorance”).[89]

I am ashamed to admit how ignorant I was when I got two
doctorate degrees—one, you might know, is honorary—but if you are
alert in the ways of scholarship you should know that people are to be judged
only by what they produce, and that is to be judged not by the
credentials of the author but by your own estimate of what he says. My efforts
are heavily loaded with footnotes to take the heat off me and shunt the reader
to the sources he should consult. For in the field of ancient history I regret
to say I was not privileged to be present at any of the events
recorded—that is why I must cravenly refer the reader to others.[90]

My long delay in answering you is due to the months of
soul-searching to determine, if I could, why on earth anybody would want to
hear from me. I am a crashing bore, and that is why I plaster everything I
write so heavily with footnotes, turning the conversation over to more
interesting people.[91]

At one juncture in his paper, Huggins mentions that although
“his literary output was enormous, Hugh Nibley seldom published in
scholarly journals outside Utah, and even less in ones dedicated to the study
of ancient Judaism, Christianity, and the Bible.”[92] He conjectures
that this may partially be a result of Nibley’s “propensity for
misquotation” (p. 16). Fortunately, on Nibley’s choice of where to
publish we can turn to his own explanation:

But to be taken seriously one must publish, and I soon found
that publishing in the journals is as easy and mechanical as getting grades: I
sent out articles to a wide variety of prestigious journals, and they were all
printed. So I lost interest. What those people were after is not what I was
after. Above all, I could see no point to going on through the years marshalling
an ever-lengthening array of titles to stand at attention some day at the foot
of an obituary. That is what they were all working for, and they were welcome
to it. But there were hints I could not ignore and answers I must seek for my
own peace of mind.[93]

Ironically, the first rejection of a
piece for publication came from the church-published periodical The
Nibley must have been most astonished that the editor, Loren F.
Wheelwright, had the audacity to reject a solicited article on “Archaeology
and Our Religion” for a series entitled “I Believe.”[94]
Since Nibley believed that “archaeological evidences were a particularly
shaky form of proof,” he unexpectedly “delineated the overall
weaknesses of archaeology as a science.”[95] Upon
receiving the rejection, Nibley wrote a rather scathing five-page response in
which he said that he, of course, was “beyond all doubt the world’s
foremost authority” on what he believed.[96]

This last, and quite lengthy, quotation is Nibley’s
description of what is essential in writing and publishing in graduate school.
Here he proposes the ideal circumstances of preparing a paper for publication.

Question: You have said that a paper must be first of all
authentic. What do you mean by that?

Answer: Two things—but they are really the same: it
must be accurate, and it must be complete. Without the highest standards of
accuracy, even the most ingenious and learned study may be not only
useless—since the work will have to be done all over again—but
actually pernicious, since it will lead the unwary astray.

Question: But isn’t perfect accuracy impossible?

Answer: Yes, slips can be detected in the most careful
work, but they are not characteristic of such work—they are recognizably
slips. It is when inaccuracy is due to lack of familiarity with one’s subject,
usually when one has bitten off more than one can chew, sliding over into
related areas with which one has only limited acquaintance, that inaccuracy becomes
disastrous. Accuracy is actually a much rarer quality than we think. It
requires patient and meticulous covering of all the ground. That is the sort
of drudgery with which the “grand old man” or the “authority”
in his field is liable to have diminishing patience with over the years, and
with which the young student eager for success and recognition may have no
patience at all. The temptation to cheat is very great—who is going to go
to all the trouble of looking up one’s footnotes? Not even the reviewers.
Inaccurate documentation may go undiscovered for years. Being accurate requires
doing a thoroughly thorough job. That is why we say that accuracy and
completeness are really the same thing in research.

Question: If there is no such thing as perfect accuracy,
how complete is complete?

Answer: More complete than you think: where any information
at all is lacking, no conclusions can ever be trusted; how often has just one
bit of evidence changed the whole picture? No stone can be left unturned; since
there is no way of knowing what an unexamined source might contain, to leave
any source unexamined is to ignore material that may, and often does, refute
one’s entire thesis.

Question: Do you mean that an ordinary student must
examine every
piece of evidence on a subject?

Answer: Yes. Not to use all available evidence is to
defeat the whole purpose of research, which is to add to the fund of existing
knowledge. How can you add to it if you don’t know what is already there and
what is missing? No future progress is possible where past progress is ignored.
What is the advantage of centuries of writing and research that others have put
into my subject if I intend to consider only ten percent of it? By what right
do I presume to ask others to give my work the respectful attention which I
deny to theirs? We cannot honestly add a word to historical writing until we
know what needs to be added.

Question: Do you mean that an ordinary student must
examine every source in every library in the world before he considers his work

Answer: Exactly. I grant you it isn’t easy (there is no
such thing as an ordinary student, by the way); in the past, it has been all
but impossible, and for that reason real scholars were few and far between. But
today the whole structure of university research activity is based on the assumption
that complete research is possible. . . .

Question: Should ten, twenty, or thirty references be required
for a term paper?

Answer: I have heard that question before at the BYU and
hardly believed my ears. On the old Library Committee we used to discuss by the
hour how many titles would be necessary for the library of a college with five
thousand, ten thousand, or fifteen thousand students. It would make as much
sense to ask how many volumes of an encyclopedia are needed by a small school,
a middle-sized school, or a large school, or how many ingredients should go
into a one-pound, a two-pound, or a three-pound pudding or cake. The answer is
always the same: no matter how much of a thing you want to make,
you must always put into it all the ingredients its nature
requires. For a given paper one must have all the references necessary for
an honest presentation—whether that means two or two hundred is entirely
beside the point. . . .

Question: Isn’t it both exhausting and discouraging to try
to buck the fierce competition in the scholarly journals?

Answer: There is no competition! The press is large and
hungry—overexpanded, in fact, and the constant complaint of editors is
that they almost never get anything that is informed, original, and
significant. The editors are pathetically eager to welcome any good material
from any source.[97]

Based on Nibley’s recommendations, it is likely that few
publications meet these rigorous standards. Nibley was one of the few scholars
who could come close to claiming that he had covered “all
the ground.” His incessant and insatiable drive to read and to learn allowed
him to acknowledge that some of what he wrote should be rejected, changed, or
built upon. He was always ready to confess shortcomings, but he never lost the
thrill of gaining and sharing new insights. I have always pictured him in the
hereafter meeting with Abraham or some other prophet or scholar in earnest
conversation: “Tell me how things really were when you were on the earth,”
“Oh, so that’s what really happened,” or “That principle now
makes perfect sense.” He would then promptly debunk, in typical fashion,
all he had written in mortality. I submit, however, that inasmuch as his
writings continue to influence people for good he has not written in vain and
that any existing errors in his corpus do not negate the overall good he has
done and continues to do. Nibley, I propose, has built “upon the rock of
our Redeemer, who is Christ, the Son of God.” He realized, along with
Helaman, “that ye must build your foundation; that when the devil shall
send forth his mighty winds, yea, his shafts in the whirlwind, yea, when all
his hail and his mighty storm shall beat upon you, it shall have no power over
you to drag you down to the gulf of misery and endless wo, because of the rock
upon which ye are built, which is a sure foundation, a foundation whereon if
men build they cannot fall” (Helaman 5:12).[98]

Appendix: Introductions to Volumes in the
Collected Works of Hugh Nibley

As John Gee informed Huggins, “The question is whether
the source cited says what the author citing it says that it says. This
procedure has been described in several editorial introductions to works in the
Collected Works of Hugh Nibley.”[99] I have
collated here several statements drawn from those introductions, as well as an
additional statement made in a review by Todd Compton, that shed light on
Nibley’s footnotes.

The first step in this process of settling the territory
mapped out by Nibley is the extremely welcome and valuable Collected
Works of Hugh Nibley.
. . . Here, all of Nibley’s footnotes have
been checked for accuracy and relevancy—so simple errors such as wrong
page numbers, confusing or incorrect bibliographical information, and so on,
should be corrected (though as an editor of a former volume, I know that one
cannot achieve anything approaching perfection in such a project). . . .

Finally, we may ask how these new editions compare with
the earlier ones. As we have mentioned, the footnotes are significantly
improved, standardized, corrected, sometimes with added bibliographic
information (titles of articles and recent translations of books).[100]

This volume [The Prophetic Book of Mormon]
concludes the Book of Mormon component of The Collected Works of Hugh Nibley. The
four Book of Mormon volumes in this series should be seen as a unit in order to
understand the inter­related Book of Mormon insights of Nibley’s mind and
spirit. These four volumes could not have been collected, checked, edited, and
published without the dedicated work of [list of names follows].[101]

Literally thousands of hours have gone into the
production of this volume: checking and double-checking references, typing,
editing, consulting, confirming all sorts of details, and proofreading.[102]

Many people have assisted with this volume. I am
particularly glad to acknowledge their invaluable work, especially in checking
citations and performing various other necessary editorial labors.[103]

The source checking for this new edition was carried out
meticulously. We have tried to make the sources accessible to the interested
reader. Unfortunately, some of the sources cited in the original edition have
proved impossible to find, mostly because the citations were made
parenthetically with numbers that referred to a numbered bibliographic list;
typographical errors in those numbers have made the sources difficult or
impossible to find. In a few cases, we have retained the material without
source citation for whatever value it may have for the reader; in those cases
we have indicated in an endnote that the source was not found.[104]

Joseph Ponczoch worked on the monumental task of
determining the source of each quotation in the text. . . . This proved truly
formidable because fewer than one of every twenty quotations in the typescript
included even minimal citation information. . . . Because of the condition of
the original manuscript and the considerable interval of time since its
composition [class lectures from 1954], we and our assistants (even with Nibley’s
suggestions) have been unable to locate the sources of all references. . . .
Footnotes indicate those quotations that stem from still unidentified sources.[105]

We have checked all the citations in the more than four
thousand footnotes. I myself have checked over half of them. Since Nibley made
his own translations from all foreign languages except where noted, we have
given him wide latitude in rendering his translations. . . . Except for the
education it has given the source checkers, the process of checking the
footnotes has been, for the most part, unnecessary. Analysis of a random
chapter showed that of its almost seven hundred citations, Nibley was
completely accurate 94 percent of the time, and in more than half of these
remaining forty cases, one could explain the problem as a typographical error.
Nibley is more accurate than most Egyptologists whose footnotes I have checked,
and several times I have been amazed at how his translations of passages have
correctly interpreted the grammar of Egyptian while the standard Egyptological
translations have not. In this edition, as in other editions of the Collected
Works of Hugh Nibley, notes have been expanded to include full bibliographic
information. . . . The content has also been checked and adjusted if necessary.
Despite our best efforts, there may still be mistakes, and in the end Nibley is
responsible for his own footnotes, but readers should expect to find that the
source is where Nibley says it is and that it says what he said it said.[106]


[1] Columbia
College Conservative Club, “Bellesiles’s Case Shows Need for Institutional
Reform in Bancroft Committee and Columbia History Department,” 18 December
2002, www.ocshooters.com/Reports/Arming_America/arming_america.htm#cuprize (accessed
8 September 2008).

[2] Ronald
Huggins is an associate professor of theological and historical studies at the
Salt Lake Theological Seminary. He also directs the master of arts program in
theological studies. However, according to Jessica Ravitz, “Salt Lake
Theological Seminary Set to Close,” Salt Lake Tribune, 28
October 2008, the seminary will be closing at the end of this
academic year due to economic challenges. It is unclear at this point what
Huggins’s professional future will hold. Given the amount of writing he has
done in recent issues of the Salt Lake City Messenger, perhaps
he will end up working at the Utah Lighthouse Ministry. He obtained his
doctorate (ThD) from Wycliffe College at the University of Toronto. His areas
of expertise include New Testament (specializing in the synoptic problem and
Pauline studies) and church history (specializing in patristics and American
religious history). See www.slts.edu/Faculty/huggins.htm (accessed 10 September

[3] Huggins’s
article was first submitted for publication in Dialogue, but
it never appeared in its pages. Perhaps in response to the peer reviews of that
earlier version, Huggins changed some wording throughout and altered paragraphs
(e.g., p. 9). He gives credit to an early reviewer for correcting the
usage of a Greek verb (p. 17 n. 53), so he did have access to those reviews
(whether in full or in summary). He added new material discussing claims of
John Gee and Kent Jackson, praising Nibley for inspiring a rising generation of
scholars, and also complaining about the difficulty of common people being able
to check Nibley’s obscure sources in languages other than English (when an
English version was available) (pp. 9–11). (Nibley was not very
patient with those who had not “paid their dues” and studied the
languages for themselves. “About twenty years ago, a student named Michael
Carter said that he pestered Nibley with questions one day for about an hour.
After that time, Nibley, obviously growing impatient with the continued
questioning, muttered something that Carter could not understand. When Carter
asked what he had said, Nibley responded: ‘Is it my fault you don’t speak
Icelandic?'” John Gee, personal communication, 3 October 2008.) He added
some clarifications of his arguments (e.g., pp. 11, 12), including a
grammatical explanation (p. 17). Huggins dropped a page and a half of his
discussion of Nibley’s use of passages from Eusebius’s Preparation
for the Gospel
(would have been between pp. 15 and 16); a
paragraph in his discussion of the Shepherd of Hermas (would have been on
p. 16); and a section on Origen’s First Principles (would have been
on p. 17); and he replaced the three-and-a-half-page conclusion of his
original manuscript—in which he suggested further problems with Nibley’s
footnotes—with a new ending entitled “Nibley’s Defenders”
(discussing Daniel Peterson and John Gee) (pp. 19–21).

[4] Martha
Beck, Leaving
the Saints: How I Lost the Mormons and Found My Faith
(New York:
Crown, 2005), 164–67. This claim can only be based on Martha’s “source,”
for she personally never could have checked her father’s notes for
herself—it took a dozen checkers about five years to check three-fourths
of Nibley’s notes in the Collected Works of Hugh Nibley. One paragraph that was
dropped from the second page of Huggins’s original manuscript reveals his
candid opinion of Nibley’s footnotes: “My conclusions might as well be
stated up front: what Tweedy claims is what I have found to be true myself. In
addition, although Tweedy’s 90% figure may be too high, one does find oneself
encountering problems with Nibley’s use of his sources alarmingly often”
(would have been on p. 9).

[5] However,
the three pages in the original manuscript detailing how Nibley may have
misused these eight sources have been dropped—perhaps the publishers felt
the article was long enough without that section. Huggins’s claim that these
sources may not have all been relevant reveals something of Nibley’s footnoting
practices. Often, Nibley would insert a footnote with sources for only the
final word or phrase of a sentence, not the entire idea. He would also give as
many supplementary sources as he could think of in case anyone wished to pursue
the topic further—since he read so widely, these lists of sources
sometimes seemed irrelevant but, I’m sure, were all pertinent in his ordered

[6] For the
story of this debate, see William A. Clebsch, “History and Salvation: An
Essay in Distinctions,” in The Study of Religion
in Colleges and Universities
, ed. Paul Ramsey and John
F. Wilson (Princeton: Princeton University Press, 1970), 40–72, esp. 70,
where Clebsch says “the issue was settled—by
assertion—according to Nibley’s prediction.”

[7]  Jeffrey
Needle, review of Eloquent Witness: Nibley on Himself, Others,
and the Temple
, www.ldsbooklovers.com/bookreview.asp?rid=199&bid=2298&pid=0
(accessed 26 August 2008).

[8] See “Hugh
Nibley/Footnotes,” at en.fairmormon.org/Hugh_Nibley:Footnotes (accessed 8
September 2008). This shows that Needle’s claim that “his defenders
ignore the charges” is not true.

[9] See Kent P.
Jackson, review of Old Testament and Related Studies, by Hugh Nibley, BYU Studies 28/4
(1988): 114–19; a rebuttal to Jackson is in Louis Midgley, “Hugh
Winder Nibley: Bibliography and Register,” in By Study and Also by Faith:
Essays in Honor of Hugh W. Nibley on the Occasion of His Eightieth Birthday, 27
March 1990
, ed. John M. Lundquist and Stephen D. Ricks (Salt Lake
City: Deseret Book and FARMS, 1990), 1:lxxi–lxxiii; Kent P. Jackson,
review of Leaving
the Saints: How I Lost the Mormons and Found My Faith
, by
Martha Beck, FARMS Review 17/1 (2005): 107–22; Boyd J.
Petersen, “Response to Leaving the Saints,” FARMS Review
17/2 (2005): 217–51, citing e-mail correspondence from Todd
Compton, Glen Cooper, John Gee, William Hamblin, and Stephen Ricks; Robert L.
Millet, “‘They Leave It, but They Can’t Leave It Alone': The Memoir of a
Disaffected Mormon,” Books & Culture 11/4 (July–August 2005): 33.

[10] Porter G.
Perrin, Writer’s
Guide and Index to English
, 4th ed. (Chicago: Scott,
Foresman, 1965), 438.

[11] Anthony
Grafton, The
Footnote: A Curious History
(Cambridge: Harvard University Press,
1997), 4–5.

[12] Chicago
Manual of Style
, 15th ed. (Chicago: University of Chicago Press,
2003), 16.1. This volume is the publishing industry’s standard.

[13] Andy Guess,
“Cite Check,” Inside Higher Ed, 8 July 2008, www.insidehighered
.com/news/2008/07/08/citation (accessed 8 September 2008). My thanks to John
Gee for leading me to this Web site and related information.

[14] Andy Guess,
“Cite Check.”

[15] Malcolm
Wright and J. Scott Armstrong, “The Ombudsman: Verification of Citations:
Fawlty Towers of Knowledge?” Interfaces 38/2 (2008): 126.

[16] Andy Guess,
“Cite Check,” citing Wright and Armstrong, “Verification of Citations,”

[17] Wright and
Armstrong, “Verification of Citations,” 126.

[18] See www.usfca.edu/org/mlj/submissions/index.html
for Maritime
Law Journal
submissions (accessed 8 September 2008).

[19] Andy Guess,
“Cite Check.”

[20] See
www.blackwellpublishing.com/submit.asp?ref=0896-5811 for Journal of
Legal Studies Education
submissions (accessed 8 September 2008).

[21] James
Pakala, library director at Covenant Theological Seminary, 8 July 2008, at
www.insidehighered.com/news/2008/07/08/citation (accessed 8 September 2008).

[22] Sandy
Thatcher, director, Penn State University Press, 8 July 2008, at
www.insidehighered.com/news/2008/07/08/citation (accessed 8 September 2008).

[23] An account
of this affair is found in Peter C. Hoffer, Past Imperfect: Facts, Fictions,
Fraud—American History from Bancroft and Parkman to Ambrose, Bellesiles,
Ellis, and Goodwin
(New York: Public Affairs, 2004), 141–71 (“Falsification:
The Case of Michael Bellesiles).

[24] Clayton E.
Cramer, “Why Footnotes Matter: Checking Arming America’s Claims,” Plagiary:
Cross-Disciplinary Studies in Plagiarism, Fabrication, and Falsification
(2006): 2.

[25] Cramer, “Why
Footnotes Matter,” 7.

[26] Cramer, “Why
Footnotes Matter,” 19–20. Another historical controversy of the 1980s
involved the accusation that David Abraham had engaged in scholarship that “was
not just deficient but fraudulent” in his book The Collapse of the Weimar
Republic: Political Economy and Crisis
(Princeton: Princeton
University Press, 1981). Peter Novick details the events of this story in That Noble
Dream: The “Objectivity Question” and the American Historical
(Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1988),
612–21, quotation on p. 613. Abraham admitted to having committed
careless errors but showed that “his argument was sustained at least as
well by the corrected as by the original versions.” Empiricists were
infuriated that this demonstrated “the relative autonomy of the argument
from details of the evidence” (Novick, That Noble Dream, 616–17).

[27] For a
recent example of a professor/political activist being fired, check details on
the University of Colorado’s Ward Churchill, who was accused of “research
misconduct, including plagiarism, fabrication, and falsification”; see en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ward_Churchill_misconduct_issues
(accessed 23 September 2008).

[28] See the
appendix to this article, pp. 289–91, to review what various
introductions to individual volumes in the Collected Works have said on the
matter of source checking and note accuracy.

[29] I hesitate
to begin naming names, for surely some will be left out, but some of the
Collected Workers were Glen Cooper, James Fleugel (now deceased), John Gee,
Fran Clark (Hafen), Andrew Hedges, Janet Carpenter (Hovorka), Gary Keeley, Jill Keeley, Darrell Matthews,
Daniel McKinlay, Janet McNeely, Brent McNeely, Tyler Moulton, Shirley Ricks,
Stephen Ricks, Matthew Roper, Morgan Tanner, James Tredway, and John Welch. I
should also mention here that Phyllis Nibley, Hugh’s wife, always reads the
manuscripts and makes excellent suggestions before they are published.

[30] John W.
Welch, e-mail correspondence, 11 August 2008.

[31] Fran Clark
(Hafen), journal entry, 7 August 1988, 1.

[32] According
to Glen Cooper, personal communication, 8 October 2008, 3, “James Tredway
played a key role as the coordinating editor for a number of volumes for
several years. The work would never have been finished without his bull-headed
dedication to the project and his cantankerous determination.”

[33] James V.
Tredway, personal communication, 11 August 2008, 6–7.

[34] Phyllis
Nibley, personal conversation with Shirley Ricks, 11 September 2008.

[35] Janet
Carpenter (Hovorka), e-mail correspondence, 16 October 2008. She goes on to
say: “You have to remember the amazing part of this is that it was
pre-internet and pre-database. I remember Tyler Moulton and Andrew Hedges
slogging for months through the Journal of Discourses for Brother
Brigham Challenges the Saints.
It wasn’t very long before you could
just type a search on that into a database. But back then you couldn’t. And of
course when Nibley wrote it, you couldn’t do anything of the sort. That is what
is so amazing. Brother Nibley amassed and congealed the research. We had a
tough time just following it.”

[36] John Gee
relates two amusing stories about the mistakes that editors have made with
Nibley’s materials. “The first was the editors at the Ensign
who, in dealing with Nibley’s piece ‘A Strange Thing in the Land,’ ran across
reference to the book of 1 Jeu and changed it to 1 Jew. The other one
is a typist who accidentally changed a word that she was unfamiliar with.
Nibley stated that ‘there is no eschatology without protology,’ which was
changed by the typist to ‘there is no eschatology without proctology'; this was
amusingly corrupted further as ‘there is no scatology without proctology.'”
Gee, personal communication, 3 October 2008.

[37] According
to Matthew Roper, “When I started checking the footnotes for Mythmakers
and Sounding
it seemed that about half of the references were incorrect.
Upon investigating, however, I found that in most cases the footnotes had
either the correct page number with the wrong title or the correct title with
the wrong page number. Before the updated volume was published, we had been
able to correct all but about 2 percent of the references. This exercise, which
I enjoyed very much, suggested to me that Nibley had read through the sources
but had been in somewhat of a hurry. Having spent a lot of time reading and
rereading and scouring the words of Ann Eliza, I gained a better appreciation
for Nibley’s wit and humor as well as the patience of Brigham Young.”

[38] Tredway,
personal communication, 11 August 2008, 7–8.

[39] Cooper
discusses one of the rules the source checkers developed: “If we searched
for a note or quotation and could not find it after a reasonable length of time,
we agreed to give up and simply remove the quotation marks and the footnote.
But in my experience this was rare. . . . With a bit of sleuthing, the correct
reference could be found.” Cooper, personal communication, 8 October 2008,
2, 1.

[40] Thanks to
James Tredway for reminding me of this issue.

[41] See Hugh
Nibley’s description of this phenomenon in “An Intellectual Auto­biography,”
in Eloquent
Witness: Nibley on Himself, Others, and the Temple
(Salt Lake City:
Deseret Book and FARMS, 2008), 12.

[42] Tredway,
personal communication, 11 August 2008, 8–9.

[43] Tyler
Moulton, personal communication, 25 September 2008, 1. The difficulty in
locating these sources would have been circumvented with current Internet

[44] Hugh
Nibley, “Paths That Stray: Some Notes on Sophic and Mantic,” in The Ancient State: The Rulers and the Ruled (Salt Lake City: Deseret Book and FARMS, 1991),

[45] Tredway,
personal communication, 11 August 2008, 9–10.

[46] Tredway,
personal communication, 11 August 2008, 10.

[47] Hugh
Nibley, The
Message of the Joseph Smith Papyri: An Egyptian Endowment
, 2nd
(Salt Lake City: Deseret Book and FARMS, 2005), 201.

[48] Gee,
personal communication, 3 October 2008; see John Gee, “The Keeper of the
Gate,” in The Temple in Time and Eternity, ed.
Donald W. Parry and Stephen D. Ricks (Provo, UT: FARMS, 1999), 235.

[49] Gee,
personal communication, 3 October 2008.

[50] Welch,
e-mail correspondence, 11 August 2008.

[51] John Gee,
e-mail correspondence to Ronald Huggins, 12 July 2006, referring to statements
of John Gee, e-mail correspondence to Boyd Petersen, 14 March 2005 and 13
January 2005 (p. 20).

[52] Moulton,
personal communication, 25 September 2008, 1–2.

[53] Moulton,
personal communication, 25 September 2008, 2. Cooper, personal communication, 8
October 2008, 2, corroborates this view: “I heard Hugh many times complain
that FARMS had published something of his that embarrassed him because it
represented an earlier perspective that he had surpassed in his scholarly

[54] Hugh
Nibley, Approaching Zion (Salt Lake City: Deseret Book and FARMS, 1989).

[55] Douglas F.
Salmon, letters to John W. Welch, 22 March 2005 and 15 January 2008.

[56] See “Hugh
Nibley/Footnotes,” especially all the footnotes that lead to other

[57] See
John Gee, “Hugh Nibley/Footnotes,” personal communication to FAIR
wiki editors, 10 August 2007. Louis Midgley addresses this topic in this issue
of the FARMS Review, p. 296, in his review of Eloquent Witness, by Nibley. “There
is also a tall tale being circulated that has become a favorite of one
sectarian anti-Mormon zealot. His argument is that Nibley both roundly
distorted the sources he cited and faked his footnotes. . . . I did the source
and quotation checking on two of his more complicated essays [“Beyond
Politics” and “Treasures in the Heavens”], and I was eventually
able to track everything down. The many problems I had finding the sources he
cited, I discovered, were the result of my own ignorance. And whatever tiny
mistakes I found were either transpositions of page numbers or the obvious
result of his having relied on his shorthand notes. This is not, of course, to
say that I would put exactly the same spin on all the passages he cited or
quoted. But my mastery of the languages and literature he consulted and cited
is at best rudimentary. Of course, Nibley got some things wrong. And, of course,
subsequent LDS scholarship has not always supported some of his hunches. That
is to be expected. It happens to everyone who ventures away from routine, safe
paths. It is time that critics cease attacking the man and deal, instead, with
relevant substantive issues. When some of Nibley’s critics have tried to do
this, they have floundered at times because they lack his command of the
relevant languages and cannot match the scope of his learning.”

[58] Nibley
seems to be in good company here. Regarding his translation of the Bible into
German, Martin Luther was “charged by the enemies of truth that the text
has been modified and even falsified in many places.” In response, Luther
wrote an open letter on translation in which he makes such statements as “If
I, Dr. Luther, had expected that all the papists together were capable of
translating even one chapter of Scripture correctly and well into German, I
would have gathered up enough humility to ask for their aid and assistance. . .
. However, because I knew . . . that not one of them knows how to translate or
speak German, I spared them and myself the trouble. . . . I know quite well how
much skill, hard work, sense and brains are needed for a good translation.”
Martin Luther, “Ein Sendbrief D. M. Luthers. Von Dolmetschen und Fürbit
der Heiligenn,” in Dr. Martin Luthers Werke (Weimar: Böhlhaus, 1909),
30.2.632–46, available online at www.bible-researcher.com/luther01.html
(accessed 7 October 2008).

[59] Tredway,
personal communication, 11 August 2008, 10–11.

[60] Don Norton,
personal communication, 13 August 2008, 2. It might be informative to check the
footnotes to one of Huggins’s own articles, perhaps even the one under review.

[61] Michael
Rhodes, e-mail correspondence, 8 August 2008.

[62] Cooper,
personal communication, 8 October 2008, 1. (As an undergraduate, Cooper earned
national awards in Greek translation and Latin composition.)

[63] On adding a
word in German that wasn’t in the original, Luther explains that “it
conveys the sense of the text—if the translation is to be clear and
vigorous, it belongs there.” Luther, “Ein Sendbrief D. M. Luthers.”

[64] Even so it
is not apparent that Huggins’s readings of the primary sources in the original
language is as extensive as Nibley’s. Huggins criticizes an unusual translation
of a Greek phrase by Gee because he was using a different sense of the word
than other commentators or than what one might find in a New Testament Greek
dictionary (p. 11 n. 14). Huggins does not translate the phrase independently.
He seems to ignore the fact that Gee knew it was an unusual translation and
explained his reasoning. Is not scholarship presenting one’s point of view and
then defending it?

[65] See Carl
Mosser and Paul Owen, “Mormon Scholarship, Apologetics, and Evangelical
Neglect: Losing the Battle and Not Knowing It?” Trinity Journal, n.s., 19/2
(1998): 196. My thanks to Tredway for reminding me of this source.

[66] I am
unaware of the languages Huggins may have studied or of what level of
competence he may have achieved in them (he does mention having taught Latin in
private Christian schools), but he seems unwilling (or unable) to translate
these passages for himself (see note 58 above). I would think that
demonstrating a personal knowledge of the languages would be essential in
making his arguments. Why did Huggins select the translations he did? “Do
they better explain the meaning or experiences of the people of that time when
compared to Nibley’s translation? Translation is a fluid conversion of one
culture to another and is done with many factors in mind.” James V.
Tredway, e-mail correspondence, 24 September 2008.

[67] Luther, “Ein
Sendbrief D. M. Luthers.” He continues: “I have learned by experience
what an art and what a task translating is, so I will not tolerate some papal
donkey or mule acting as my judge or critic. They have not tried it. If anyone
does not like my translations, he can ignore it. . . . If it needs to be criticized,
I will do it myself. If I do not do it, then let them leave my translations in
peace. Each of them can do a translation for himself that suits him—what
do I care?” I have a feeling Luther and Nibley would get along well

[68] Moulton,
personal communication, 25 September 2008, 3.

[69] Moulton,
personal communication, 25 September 2008, 3.

[70] “Hugh
was a great stylist in English; his command of the language and skill at
argument will long remain vibrant and powerful even after the content of his
scholarship may have faded, or at worst, become antiquated.” Cooper,
personal communication, 8 October 2008, 2–3.

[71] Suggestions
from James V. Tredway, e-mail correspondence, 20 August 2008, and Gee, personal
communication, 3 October 2008.

[72] Nibley, Message of
the Joseph Smith Papyri
, 488.

[73] See “O
My Father,” Hymns, no. 292, verse 1.

[74] Kristian
Heal, e-mail correspondence, 7 October 2008.

[75] Cooper,
personal communication, 8 October 2008, 1, admits that “occasionally he
would read a source in an idiosyncratic way, but that’s the scholar’s

[76] Hugh
Nibley, “Translation,” notes from a presentation, 11 February 1975,
Salt Lake City, Utah, 3.4. In this particular passage, he was referring to
translating poetry.

[77] Nibley, “Translation,”

[78] Norton,
personal communication, 13 August 2008, 2.

[79] Richard
Lloyd Anderson, “Joseph Smith’s Insights into the Olivet Prophecy: Joseph
Smith 1 and Matthew 24,” in Pearl of Great Price Symposium: A Centennial
(Provo, UT: Brigham Young University, 1976), 50; my
thanks to Tredway for suggesting this source and this idea.

[80] Luther, “Ein
Sendbrief D. M. Luthers.”

[81] Norton,
personal communication, 13 August 2008, 2.

[82] Mosser and
Owen, “Mormon Scholarship,” 183.

[83] Mosser and
Owen, “Mormon Scholarship,” 183, quoting Truman G. Madsen, foreword
to Nibley
on the Timely and the Timeless: Classic Essays of Hugh W. Nibley
UT: BYU Religious Studies Center, 1978), xiv.

[84] See the
contributions by these men in volume 1 of the Festschrift published in Nibley’s
honor, By Study and Also by Faith, as well as a second essay by Neusner in volume 2.

[85] Mosser and
Owen, “Mormon Scholarship,” 183–84, quoting from Philip L. Barlow,
and the Bible: The Place of the Latter-day Saints in American Religion
Oxford University Press, 1991), 147 n. 105. This note also describes “the
prolific Hugh Nibley, whose genius is unquestioned . . . but whose methods
remain controversial.”

[86] Hugh
Nibley, “The Facsimiles of the Book of Abraham: A Response,” Sunstone, December
1979, 49; to appear in volume 18 of the Collected Works, An Approach
to the Book of Abraham

[87] Hugh
Nibley, letter to Susie Timko, Provo, Utah, 19 October 1979.

[88] Hugh
Nibley, letter to David H. Mulholland, Anaheim, California, 26 June 1981.

[89] Hugh
Nibley, letter to Pam Lane, Simi Valley, California, 22 June 1982.

[90] Hugh
Nibley, letter to David L. Parkos, Parker, Colorado, 2 December 1983.

[91] Hugh
Nibley, letter to Irene Horsley, Kearns, Utah, 22 May 1985.

[92] I’m not
sure what point Huggins is trying to make here—a quick glance at “Hugh
Winder Nibley: Bibliography and Register,” comp. Louis Midgley, in By Study and
Also by Faith
(Salt Lake City: Deseret Book, 1990),
1:xv–lxxxvii, reveals that Nibley published in at least the following
periodicals: American Political Science Review,
Christianity Today
, Church History, Classical
, Concilium: An International Review of Theology, Historian, Jewish
Quarterly Review
, Revue de Qumran, Vigiliae
, and Western Political Quarterly, as
well as in Encyclopedia
He was offered the distinguished position of departmental editor
for the encyclopedia for sections dealing with Christian Latin biblical
exegesis (it sounds to me like they had a pretty high opinion of Nibley’s
linguistic talents), but he regretfully declined when he couldn’t clear his
busy schedule. See Boyd J. Petersen, Hugh Nibley: A Consecrated Life (Salt
Lake City: Greg Kofford Books, 2002), 299–300. I see listed on Huggins’s
own bibliography very few publications in academic journals; the rest of his
writing seems to concentrate on criticizing the faith and teachings of the
Latter-day Saints. Is that how someone with a research degree (ThD) advances
from assistant to associate professorship?

[93] Nibley, “An
Intellectual Autobiography,” 15–16.

[94] “This,
in fact, is the first article I have ever had rejected, which makes it
most interesting—especially since the rejection is by an LDS publication
which requested it in the first place!” Hugh Nibley, letter to Loren F.
Wheelwright, 16 September 1965. Interestingly, during his years of being in
charge of music in the Salt Lake City School District, Wheelwright was
partially responsible for encouraging Phyllis Nibley to take up the cello in
the sixth grade (although he rightly concluded that Louis Midgley had no future
with the violin).

[95] Petersen, Hugh Nibley, 300–301.
This article was eventually published in Hugh Nibley, Old
Testament and Related Studies
(Salt Lake City: Deseret Book and
FARMS, 1986), 21–36.

[96] Nibley,
letter to Wheelwright, 16 September 1965.

[97] Hugh
Nibley, “Writing and Publication in Graduate School,” 5–6, 10,
11; this article is slated to appear in a future volume of the Collected Works.

[98] Tom
Caldwell, who was instrumental in rescuing some of Nibley’s works from the “underground”
and who made services and copy equipment available for the source-checking
project, describes Nibley’s Sunday School classes: “He always gave us
fresh perspective on the scriptures, and he bore testimony of the gospel as one
who was a true witness. This was testimony based on experience, not just on
theory and book learning. We learned that by carefully reading the scriptures
we could find the answers to any questions they brought up (usually within the
next couple of verses). Nibley paid attention to the smallest of details,
especially when it came to the scriptures. We weren’t just fed from the
scriptures—in his classes, we were served a feast fit for the greatest of
kings.” Nibley’s testimony was “From what I’ve seen and heard, the
gospel is true. Amen.” Caldwell, e-mail correspondence, 9 October

[99] Gee, e-mail
correspondence to Huggins, 12 July 2006.

[100] Todd Compton,
review of Lehi
in the Desert, The World of the Jaredites, There Were Jaredites; An Approach to
the Book of Mormon; Since Cumorah
, by Hugh Nibley, Review of
Books on the Book of Mormon
1 (1989): 116, 117–18.

[101] John W.
Welch, in The
Prophetic Book of Mormon
(Salt Lake City: Deseret Book and FARMS,
1989), x.

[102] Don E.
Norton, in Approaching
, xviii.

[103] David J.
Whittaker, in Tinkling Cymbals and Sounding Brass (Salt Lake City:
Deseret Book and FARMS, 1991), xvii.

[104] Gary P.
Gillum, in Abraham
in Egypt
, 2nd ed. (Salt Lake City: Deseret Book and FARMS,
2000), xxix.

[105] John F.
Hall and John W. Welch, in Apostles and Bishops in Early Christianity (Salt Lake
City: Deseret Book and FARMS, 2005), ix–x. Note that Douglas F. Salmon
has since identified the majority of the unidentified references.

[106] John Gee,
in Message
of the Joseph Smith Papyri
, xx.